New on Ben's Blog https://jinpeng.cv/en/tags/new/ Recent content in New on Ben's Blog Hugo -- 0.154.0 en ©️ 2025 Ben Mon, 09 Mar 2026 22:26:59 -0600 2025-11-18 https://jinpeng.cv/en/diary/2025/november/2025-11-18/ Tue, 18 Nov 2025 23:55:38 -0700 https://jinpeng.cv/en/diary/2025/november/2025-11-18/ <p>Today was my first time to go swimming formally. It&rsquo;s a little bad because I soaked too much water. As a new experience, however, it&rsquo;s definitely good.</p> <p>Amir can swimming, but I can&rsquo;t; I need to learn it. Thank my little Huan delivered gaggles and trunks to me. It&rsquo;s really useful.</p> <p>Dr.zhao retook graduation photos today, he was very happy, so many people said congratulations to him. The everyone of our group took a photo with him individually.</p> Today was my first time to go swimming formally. It’s a little bad because I soaked too much water. As a new experience, however, it’s definitely good.

Amir can swimming, but I can’t; I need to learn it. Thank my little Huan delivered gaggles and trunks to me. It’s really useful.

Dr.zhao retook graduation photos today, he was very happy, so many people said congratulations to him. The everyone of our group took a photo with him individually.

Grammar check

Here’s the grammar and clarity check for your diary entry:

Original Correct
“Today was my first time to go swimming formally.” “Today was my first time going swimming formally.”
“It’s a little bad because I soaked too much water.” “It wasn’t great because I swallowed too much water.”
“Amir can swimming, but I can’t” “Amir can swim, but I can’t”
“Thank my little Huan delivered gaggles and trunks to me.” “Thank you to my little Huan for delivering goggles and trunks to me.”
“Dr.zhao retook graduation photos today” “Dr. Zhao retook his graduation photos today”
“The everyone of our group took a photo with him individually.” “Everyone in our group took individual photos with him.”

The rest of your writing is grammatically correct and natural. The diary entry effectively communicates your experiences while maintaining a personal tone. The corrections mainly address small grammatical issues and improve clarity in a few spots.

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