今天完成了两项作业：一个是FEM，另一个是MINE 630。

Shiva回来参加毕业典礼了。我们拍了一些照片，就像之前Jian一样。我逐渐发现那些看起来很好的人也有一些负面的一面。有些人很容易看透；有些人则需要时间。

Grammar Corrections

• Original: “I went to the gym to exercise alone.”
  Corrected: “I went to the gym to exercise alone.” ✓

• Original: “Using the elliptical machine, I sweated a lot.”
  Corrected: “Using the elliptical machine, I sweated a lot.” ✓

• Original: “I finished two assignments today: one is the FEM and the other is MINE 630.”
  Corrected: “I finished two assignments today: one is FEM and the other is MINE 630.” (removed unnecessary “the” before “FEM”)

• Original: “#Shiva came back for the convocation ceremony.”
  Corrected: “# Shiva came back for the convocation ceremony.” (added space after #)

• Original: “We took some photos, like Jian did before.”
  Corrected: “We took some photos, like Jian did before.” ✓

• Original: “I gradually found some negative aspects in those who seem very good.”
  Corrected: “I gradually found some negative aspects in those who seem very good.” ✓

• Original: “Some people are easy to figure out; others take time.”
  Corrected: “Some people are easy to figure out; others take time.” ✓

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